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About Candidate
I am final year B. Pharmacy student in Bombay College of Pharmacy. I have completed my internship in IPCA laboratories where I learnt Good laboratory skills, GC and HPLC and various analytical operations. I am working as research assistant for a project entitled ‘Chitosan based Methotrexate loaded nanoparticles in Gel’ under guidance of Dr. Bindu Kumari Yadav at Bombay College of Pharmacy. I am working member in Innovation Committee of my college. I am currently looking for a job in pharmaceutical industry, Life science and Pharmacovigilance. I assure you that I am a diligent and hard working person who will add values to your company if given chance.
There are a few grammatical errors in the given paragraph:
“Bombay College of Pharmacy” should be capitalized throughout the paragraph.
There should be a comma after “Good laboratory skills” to separate it from the next item in the list.
“GC” and “HPLC” should be written out as “Gas chromatography” and “High-performance liquid chromatography,” respectively.
“Chitosan based Methotrexate loaded nanoparticles in Gel” should be written as “Chitosan-based methotrexate-loaded nanoparticles in gel,” with hyphens to connect the compound modifiers.
“I am a working member” should be changed to “I am a working member of” to clarify that the speaker is a member of the Innovation Committee.
“Life science” should be written as “life sciences” to match the plural form of “pharmaceutical industry” and “pharmacovigilance.”
The last sentence would be more grammatically correct if it were rephrased to say, “I assure you that if given the chance, I would be a diligent and hardworking employee who could add value to your company.”
Corrected paragraph:
I am a final-year B. Pharmacy student at Bombay College of Pharmacy. I have completed my internship at IPCA Laboratories, where I learned good laboratory skills, gas chromatography, high-performance liquid chromatography, and various analytical operations. I am working as a research assistant for a project entitled “Chitosan-based methotrexate-loaded nanoparticles in gel” under the guidance of Dr. Bindu Kumari Yadav at Bombay College of Pharmacy. I am also a working member of the Innovation Committee at my college. I am currently looking for a job in the pharmaceutical industry, life sciences, and pharmacovigilance. I assure you that if given the chance, I would be a diligent and hardworking employee who could add value to your company.
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Education
Work & Experience
During my one month internship at IPCA Laboratories Ltd. I learnt different analytical skills such as HPLC, GC and various instruments handling.